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It’s hard to find an anti-war poem written before the First World War. But after that War to End All Wars—and no doubt influenced by its 20 million civilian and military deaths and the horrors of poison gas and trench warfare — anti-war poems became the norm, and remain so to this day.

Probably the most well-known British war poem written before World War One is Alfred Lord Tennyson’s Charge of the Light Brigade (1854), which describes a minor battle, lasting less than an hour, that took place within the larger Crimean War. In that battle, British cavalrymen (see above), wielding lances and sabers, were ordered to charge into a small valley and destroy (or “rescue”) the Russian artillery at the end of the valley. (No one seems exactly sure what the purpose of the attack was.) Unfortunately, there were Russian cannons on the heights on either side of the valley.

Tennyson read an account of the battle in a newspaper and came up with these familiar opening lines:

Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

Those six hundred soldiers turned out to be cannon fodder. Military intelligence was faulty, and officers misinterpreted orders along the chain of command. The Light Brigade should never have charged down the valley. Tennyson glosses over that fatal error (“someone had blundered”) but instead focuses our attention on the heroism of the soldiers who obediently follow the botched orders.

Theirs not to make reply,
Theirs not to reason why,
Theirs but to do and die.

Some of the cavalrymen actually make it to the end of the mile-long valley, where they overrun the cannons and then turn to slash at the cannoneers. If they had a purpose, they seem to have forgotten it. They do nothing with the artillery.

Then they have to get back out of the valley, with the cannons firing at them from both sides again. Of the 600 soldiers who entered the valley, almost half were shot up or killed outright. There were also 375 horses killed.

The final lines are patriotic and stirring:

When can their glory fade?
O the wild charge they made!
All the world wondered.
Honour the charge they made!
Honour the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred!

Now let’s move forward about 60 years, which will take us from the Victorian Era to the First World War, to consider Wilfred Owen’s Dulce et Decorum Est. No gallant cavalry here, no spurs, handsome steeds, or sabers. Owen’s poem opens with gritty images of bloody soldiers, “drunk with fatigue,” on a forced march away from the battle.

Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs
And towards our distant rest began to trudge.
Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots
But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
Drunk with fatigue; deaf even into the hoots
Of tired, outstripped Five-Nines [mortar shells] that dropped behind.

Owen’s image of retreating soldiers always reminds me of Bill Mauldin’s famous cartoon of bedraggled WWII soldiers. The ironic cutline for the cartoon to the right reads: “Fresh, spirited American troops, flushed with victory, are bringing in thousands of hungry, ragged, battle-weary prisoners.”

In both Mauldin’s cartoon and Owen’s poem, a bitter irony arises out of the vast difference between pretty words and terrible reality.

Back to Dulce et Decorum Est. Owen now moves to a description of the effects of the poison gas attack.

Gas! Gas! Quick, boys! — An ecstasy of fumbling,
Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time;
But someone still was yelling out and stumbling
And floundering like a man in fire or lime. . .
Dim, through the misty panes and thick green light,
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.
In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.

Now begins Owen’s magnificent conclusion, which consists of two long dependent clauses that introduce Owen’s final irony-laden main clause.

If in some smothering dreams you too could walk
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
His hanging face, like a devil’s sick of sin;
If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs. . . .
My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
Pro patria mori.

The “old lie” is usually translated thus: “Sweet and fitting it is to die for your country.” After Owen’s description of the face of a man choking and screaming from the effects of poison gas, whose corpse is then piled on a wagon, I’m pretty sure that more ironic words than those have never been written.

Two ways of writing about war: In Tennyson’s poem, we look down, as if from a height, as the bloodless (in the poet’s retelling anyway) action unfolds. In Owen’s poem, we’re down there in the mud with the foot soldiers, lame and exhausted, their boots filled with blood.

Wilfred Owen was killed in action a week before the war’s end.

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  1. Repdad Coolidge

    I have nothing to add, but this is an outstanding post. 

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  2. David Foster Member
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    In 1891, Kipling wrote a kind of follow-up to Tennyson’s poem: The last of the light brigade.

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  3. KentForrester Moderator
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    repmodad (View Comment):

    I have nothing to add, but this is an outstanding post.

    Thanks, Rep. It was always a pleasure for me to teach these two poems. Each poem has its peculiar virtues. You can probably tell that I prefer the gritty one by Owen but, oddly enough, I preferred teaching the Tennyson poem. 

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  4. David Foster Member
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    Another WWI poem by a combatant is Siegfried Sassoon’s ‘The General”

    “Good-morning, good-morning!” the General saidWhen we met him last week on our way to the line.Now the soldiers he smiled at are most of ’em dead,And we’re cursing his staff for incompetent swine.“He’s a cheery old card,” grunted Harry to JackAs they slogged up to Arras with rifle and pack. But he did for them both by his plan of attack.

    One of the books that best describes the social/psychological effects of the First World War, and especially the break between generations that it brought about, is Erich Maria Remarque’s novel The Road Back….not nearly as well-known as his All Quiet on the Western Front, but it should be. I reviewed it here: https://chicagoboyz.net/archives/21350.html

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  5. KentForrester Moderator
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    David Foster (View Comment):

    Another WWI poem by a combatant is Siegfried Sassoon’s ‘The General”

    “Good-morning, good-morning!” the General saidWhen we met him last week on our way to the line.Now the soldiers he smiled at are most of ’em dead,And we’re cursing his staff for incompetent swine.“He’s a cheery old card,” grunted Harry to JackAs they slogged up to Arras with rifle and pack. But he did for them both by his plan of attack. One of the books that best describes the social/psychological effects of the First World War, and especially the break between generations that it brought about, is Erich Maria Remarque’s novel The Road Back….not nearly as well-known as his All Quiet on the Western Front, but it should be. I reviewed it here: https://chicagoboyz.net/archives/21350.html

    David, Wilfred Owen knew and was influenced by Sassoon. They met in a hospital, if I remember right, in England. Owen was in there for shell shock. 

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  6. David Foster Member
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    The Charge of the Light Brigade occurred largely because of mutual contempt and anger among the British leadership. Here’s what happened:

    The Light Cavalry Brigade was commanded by Lord Cardigan, who in turn was subordinate to the overall Cavalry commander, Lord Lucan. The two men were related, and they could not stand each other, to the point where they avoided communication. Neither was popular in the army.

    On October 25, the overall British commander in the Crimea, Lord Raglan, was situated on high ground, from which he had a far better view of the field than did Cardigan and Lucan. He and his staff observed that the Russians had captured some heavy British guns and were about to haul them away. An order was dispatched to Lucan under the signature of Raglan’s chief of staff:

    Lord Raglan wishes the cavalry to advance rapidly to the front – follow the enemy and try to prevent the enemy carrying away the guns. Troop Horse Artillery may accompany. French cavalry is on your left. R Airey. Immediate.

    The order was handed to Captain Louis Nolan, a superb horseman who was sure to deliver it as rapidly as possible. Nolan was an experienced military professional who had devoted considerable thought to cavalry tactics and believed the cavalry was being mishandled in the Crimean campaign. He viewed Cardigan and Lucan as men who lacked professionalism and held their positions only because of their inherited social status. Nolan had also served in India, and the snob Cardigan was highly prejudiced against officers with that background, believing they lacked the social graces and elegance of attire which were important to him. Nolan sent his horse diving down the hill and quickly reached the place where the cavalry was stationed.

    “Lord Raglan’s orders,” Nolan told Lucan, “are that the cavalry should attack immediately.” His tone of voice can only be guessed at, but it is said that he was “already mad with anger”…at Lucan, at Cardigan, and at the whole British command structure and what he believed to be their incompetence.

    “Attack, sir! Attack what? What guns, sir? Where and what to do?”

    “There, my Lord! There is your enemy! There are your guns!” Nolan snapped back, waving his arm in a gesture “more of rage than of indication.”

    Lucan could not see the British guns which were being hauled away; the only guns in sight were the Russian battery at the far end of the North valley, where Russian cavalry was also stationed. Certainly Nolan’s “impertinent and flamboyant” gesture had seemed to point in that direction. Lucan trotted over and passed on the order to Cardigan, who, “coldly polite,” dropped his sword in salute.

    “Certainly, sir,” Cardigan responded. “But allow me to point out to you that the Russians have a battery in the valley on our front, and riflemen and batteries on each flank.”

    “I know it,” replied Lucan. “But Lord Raglan will have it. We have no choice but to obey.”

     

     

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  7. David Foster Member
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    (continuing previous comment)

    So, what happened here? In part, the debacle was caused by technical/intellectual failings…Airey’s order could have been clearer, pointing out the direction of the designated target, which he knew Lucan and Cardigan could not see. But the main cause of the disaster, I think, was emotional. If Nolan had been able to contain his (apparently quite justified) anger at Lucan and Cardigan, and to cooly point out the direction of the target, then Raglan’s original order would surely have been carried out as intended. If Lucan and Cardigan had not disliked one another so strongly, they might have been able to discuss the order for a moment and recognize that their interpretation of it didn’t make any sense–the guns they had interpreted as their assigned target were not being “carried away.” And after the Charge had already begun, if Cardigan had been able to keep his fury at Nolan under control (he thought Nolan’s crossing in front of him meant the Nolan was trying to take command of the Brigade), he might have recognized that he needed to change directions. (In the event, Cardigan’s mind was possessed with rage at Nolan both during the charge and the return.)

    It is disturbing to think that the relationship among much of the American leadership today is just about as toxic as the relationships that existed among Lucan, Cardigan, and Nolan.

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  8. KentForrester Moderator
    KentForrester

    David Foster (View Comment):

    (continuing previous comment)

    So, what happened here? In part, the debacle was caused by technical/intellectual failings…

    It is disturbing to think that the relationship among much of the American leadership today is just about as toxic as the relationships that existed among Lucan, Cardigan, and Nolan.

    Wow, David, you do know your Charge of the Light Brigade.

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  9. Susan Quinn Contributor

    Thanks, Kent. The contrast between the two poems is fascinating and tragic.

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  10. David Foster Member
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    KentForrester (View Comment):
    Wow, David, you do know your Charge of the Light Brigade.

    Initial source was Harry Flashman, but given that he might have been biased (and didn’t actually exist), verified with other sources.

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  11. RightAngles Member

    Wilfred Owen was killed in action a week before the war’s end. 

    Same for the author of maybe the best poem that came out of WWI, I Have a Rendezvous With Death by Alan Seeger. This was one of the poems I memorized in 7th grade for one of the best English teachers I’ve ever had, Mr. Boyd. Seeger was killed in action at age 26. Knowing that makes those last two lines even more poignant.

    I have a rendezvous with Death
    At some disputed barricade,
    When Spring comes back with rustling shade
    And apple-blossoms fill the air—
    I have a rendezvous with Death
    When Spring brings back blue days and fair.

    It may be he shall take my hand
    And lead me into his dark land
    And close my eyes and quench my breath—
    It may be I shall pass him still.
    I have a rendezvous with Death
    On some scarred slope of battered hill,
    When Spring comes round again this year
    And the first meadow-flowers appear.

    God knows ’twere better to be deep
    Pillowed in silk and scented down,
    Where love throbs out in blissful sleep,
    Pulse nigh to pulse, and breath to breath,
    Where hushed awakenings are dear…
    But I’ve a rendezvous with Death
    At midnight in some flaming town,
    When Spring trips north again this year,
    And I to my pledged word am true,
    I shall not fail that rendezvous.

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    My #3 son memorized Owen’s poem last year and twinned it with a Powerpoint show for full dramatic effect.

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  13. KentForrester Moderator
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    iWe (View Comment):

    My #3 son memorized Owen’s poem last year and twinned it with a Powerpoint show for full dramatic effect.

    Wow! I can see memorizing the The Charge of the Light Brigade — but the Owen poem! That’s impressive. Your number 3 son should take it on the road. 

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  14. The Reticulator Member

    David Foster (View Comment):

    (continuing previous comment)

    So, what happened here? In part, the debacle was caused by technical/intellectual failings…Airey’s order could have been clearer, pointing out the direction of the designated target, which he knew Lucan and Cardigan could not see. But the main cause of the disaster, I think, was emotional. If Nolan had been able to contain his (apparently quite justified) anger at Lucan and Cardigan, and to cooly point out the direction of the target, then Raglan’s original order would surely have been carried out as intended. If Lucan and Cardigan had not disliked one another so strongly, they might have been able to discuss the order for a moment and recognize that their interpretation of it didn’t make any sense–the guns they had interpreted as their assigned target were not being “carried away.” And after the Charge had already begun, if Cardigan had been able to keep his fury at Nolan under control (he thought Nolan’s crossing in front of him meant the Nolan was trying to take command of the Brigade), he might have recognized that he needed to change directions. (In the event, Cardigan’s mind was possessed with rage at Nolan both during the charge and the return.)

    It is disturbing to think that the relationship among much of the American leadership today is just about as toxic as the relationships that existed among Lucan, Cardigan, and Nolan.

    That seems to match what I recently read about this charge, but now I can’t figure out what book it was in. It was one I listened to on Audible earlier this year, but my Audible collection is large and I don’t seem to recognize it. Can you recommend a source that gives this information? 

    I learned about the Charge of the Light Brigade from my grandfather, who recited part of it to me. It was probably something he learned in school in the 1890s. 

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  15. David Foster Member
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    The Reticulator (View Comment):
    That seems to match what I recently read about this charge, but now I can’t figure out what book it was in. It was one I listened to on Audible earlier this year, but my Audible collection is large and I don’t seem to recognize it. Can you recommend a source that gives this information? 

    One good source is ‘The Reason Why’…Cecil Woodham Smith. I used several other sources in researching this topic a couple of years ago, unfortunately, can’t remember them at the moment…maybe they’ll come to me.

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  16. Randy Webster Member

    KentForrester: Wilfred Owen was killed in action a week before the war’s end. 

    Shades of All Quiet on the Western Front.

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  17. Arahant Member

    Poetry that last, full of mnemonic devices.

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  18. JosePluma Thatcher

    David Foster (View Comment):

    KentForrester (View Comment):
    Wow, David, you do know your Charge of the Light Brigade.

    Initial source was Harry Flashman, but given that he might have been biased (and didn’t actually exist), verified with other sources.

    Aha! I thought I recognized that!

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  19. Randy Webster Member

    I thought it was in The Sharp End, but I couldn’t find it, so I’ll have to go from memory. The paragraph was about the 28th Infantry, and the fighting in the Huertgen Forest. It went something like, “The doggies were so tired coming off the line that there was a body lying in the trail, and even though it was from their own outfit, they were too tired to go around.”

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  20. Goldwaterwoman Thatcher

    Magnificent.

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  21. Jerry Giordano (Arizona Patrio… Member

    Kent, interesting post. I also like RightAngles’ quotation of I Have A Rendezvous With Death, which was in a poetry book that my parents gave me for Christmas 1977 (if I recall the year correctly). 101 Famous Poems, which also had this one by Canadian soldier-physician John McCrae, likewise written during WWI:

    In Flanders fields the poppies blow
    Between the crosses, row on row,
    That mark our place; and in the sky
    The larks, still bravely singing, fly
    Scarce heard amid the guns below.

    We are the Dead. Short days ago
    We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
    Loved and were loved, and now we lie
    In Flanders fields.

    Take up our quarrel with the foe:
    To you from failing hands we throw
    The torch; be yours to hold it high.
    If ye break faith with us who die
    We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
    In Flanders fields.

    It is my impression that the British drew a nihilistic and hopeless conclusion from WWI, reflected in the poem that Kent selected for the OP. The Canadian and American reaction, at least as shown in the works of Seeger and McCrae, do not fail to recognize the terrible consequences of war, but find something uplifting nevertheless.

    I wonder if this reflects a national decline in spirit that was more advanced in Britain than in Canada or the US. My impression is that Canada lost its mojo around the 1970s, and that we’re currently in the process of finding out whether the US has lost its mojo.

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  22. RightAngles Member

    Jerry Giordano (Arizona Patrio… (View Comment):

    Kent, interesting post. I also like RightAngles’ quotation of I Have A Rendezvous With Death, which was in a poetry book that my parents gave me for Christmas 1977 (if I recall the year correctly). 101 Famous Poems, which also had this one by Canadian soldier-physician John McCrae, likewise written during WWI:

    In Flanders fields the poppies blow
    Between the crosses, row on row,
    That mark our place; and in the sky
    The larks, still bravely singing, fly
    Scarce heard amid the guns below.

    We are the Dead. Short days ago
    We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
    Loved and were loved, and now we lie
    In Flanders fields.

    Take up our quarrel with the foe:
    To you from failing hands we throw
    The torch; be yours to hold it high.
    If ye break faith with us who die
    We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
    In Flanders fields.

    It is my impression that the British drew a nihilistic and hopeless conclusion from WWI, reflected in the poem that Kent selected for the OP. The Canadian and American reaction, at least as shown in the works of Seeger and McCrae, do not fail to recognize the terrible consequences of war, but find something uplifting nevertheless.

    I wonder if this reflects a national decline in spirit that was more advanced in Britain than in Canada or the US. My impression is that Canada lost its mojo around the 1970s, and that we’re currently in the process of finding out whether the US has lost its mojo.

    I also have that book. I think WWI affected the Brits and the French even more than it did us because they lost most of an entire generation of young men. It was a devastating effect for a long time.

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  23. Goldwaterwoman Thatcher

    RightAngles (View Comment):
    I also have that book. I think WWI affected the Brits and the French even more than it did us because they lost most of an entire generation of young men. It was a devastating effect for a long time.

    It most definitely did cause a huge sociological and economic upheaval in Britain and France and ushered in the Russian Revolution. Since we came in at the end of the war, it wasn’t felt nearly as much over here, plus our economy was far more diversified with a larger middle class. Although all war is undoubtedly the failure of political solutions, WWI was so very unnecessary to be almost unbelievable that nations went to war over such stupidity and arrogance. Britain lost 1,350,000, France lost 1,927,000, Russia lost roughly 2,300,000. Although these numbers seem high, I haven’t even included deaths from the Central Powers or other nations involved on the side of Entente. By way of contrast, we lost 117,000. This horrific devastation makes it easier to understand why Europeans chose to ignore the ominous signs of Hitler’s coming aggression for as long as they did. Another war was the last thing they wanted.

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  24. Jerry Giordano (Arizona Patrio… Member

    RightAngles (View Comment):

    Jerry Giordano (Arizona Patrio… (View Comment):

    Kent, interesting post. I also like RightAngles’ quotation of I Have A Rendezvous With Death, which was in a poetry book that my parents gave me for Christmas 1977 (if I recall the year correctly). 101 Famous Poems, . . .

    I also have that book. I think WWI affected the Brits and the French even more than it did us because they lost most of an entire generation of young men. It was a devastating effect for a long time.

    How cool! Listen, my children, and you shall hear . . .

    What are your favorites? Without looking, I mean. I particularly like:

    • The Gods of the Copybook Headings (Kipling)
    • Horatius at the Bridge (Macaulay)
    • Oh Captain, My Captain (Whitman)
    • If (Kipling)
    • The Building of the Ship (Longfellow)
    • Abou Ben Adhem (Leigh Hunt, I think)
    • The Fool’s Prayer (Edward Roland Sill)

    I did have to look up the authors of the last two.

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  25. Jerry Giordano (Arizona Patrio… Member

    Goldwaterwoman (View Comment):

    RightAngles (View Comment):
    I also have that book. I think WWI affected the Brits and the French even more than it did us because they lost most of an entire generation of young men. It was a devastating effect for a long time.

    It most definitely did cause a huge sociological and economic upheaval in Britain and France and ushered in the Russian Revolution. Since we came in at the end of the war, it wasn’t felt nearly as much over here, plus our economy was far more diversified with a larger middle class. Although all war is undoubtedly the failure of political solutions, WWI was so very unnecessary to be almost unbelievable that nations went to war over such stupidity and arrogance. Britain lost 1,350,000, France lost 1,927,000, Russia lost roughly 2,300,000. Although these numbers seem high, I haven’t even included deaths from the Central Powers or other nations involved on the side of Entente. By way of contrast, we lost 117,000. This horrific devastation makes it easier to understand why Europeans chose to ignore the ominous signs of Hitler’s coming aggression for as long as they did. Another war was the last thing they wanted.

    Yeah, but the Germans lost around 1.7 million, and they didn’t fall apart. They came back, more aggressive and effective than ever.

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  26. The Reticulator Member

    Jerry Giordano (Arizona Patrio… (View Comment):
    Yeah, but the Germans lost around 1.7 million, and they didn’t fall apart. They came back, more aggressive and effective than ever.

    Depends on what you mean by “fall apart.”

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  28. Goldwaterwoman Thatcher

    Jerry Giordano (Arizona Patrio… (View Comment):
    Yeah, but the Germans lost around 1.7 million, and they didn’t fall apart. They came back, more aggressive and effective than ever.

    I just looked it up. Germany lost 2,737,000. You aren’t taking into account that they lost in an ignominious defeat made worse by the Paris Peace Accords and the Treaty of Versailles, severely punishing them, the result of which was a resurgence of nationalization and determination to recover their pride. 

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  29. Skyler Coolidge

    What is missed is that the soldiers in WWI were largely content, enjoying the war. Despite the frequent portrayals, the men fought with enthusiasm. They didn’t have to use bayonets to get Americans “over the top.”

    What is missed is that men do like war. It is very exciting. “It is well that war is so terrible, otherwise we should grow too fond of it,” wrote Robert E. Lee. His sentiments are not unusual at all, and Lee was not at all a callous man. It is what men, ultimately, are made for and we thrive at it (unless we are the ones getting blown up).

    Society should recognize this and encourage it in men, directing it into sports and business and other work and recreation, so when needed the men are rough and able to fight well.

    Instead, we have Bravo channel, and as a society we inculcate a level of sissiness in our boys and young men.

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    The same day the Light Brigade rode to ruin, the Heavy Brigade rode to victory against a superior cavalry force, throwing back the Russians until the terrible blunder of the Light Brigade action gave the initiative back to the Russians at the end of the day. Both brigades were commemorated by Alfred Lord Tennyson, yet it is the tactical failure, not the victory, that is remembered in more memorable verse.

    There is an epilogue to the Heavy Brigade poem that anticipates the World War I poets’ criticism. This is fitting, because the Crimean War was the first war of modern firepower, in which the range of cannon and shoulder arms, plus rate of fire, made mass charges into mass casualties. Even so, 

    EPILOGUE

    Irene.

    Not this way will you set your name
    A star among the stars.

    Poet.

    What way?

    Irene.

    You praise when you should blame
    The barbarism of wars.
    A juster epoch has begun.

    Poet.

    Yet tho’ this cheek be gray,
    And that bright hair the modern sun,
    Those eyes the blue to-day,
    You wrong me, passionate little friend.
    I would that wars should cease,
    I would the globe from end to end
    Might sow and reap in peace,
    And some new Spirit o’erbear the old,
    Or Trade re-frain the Powers
    From war with kindly links of gold,
    Or Love with wreaths of flowers.
    Slav, Teuton, Kelt, I count them all
    My friends and brother souls,
    With all the peoples, great and small,
    That wheel between the poles.
    But since our mortal shadow, Ill,
    To waste this earth began–
    Perchance from some abuse of Will
    In worlds before the man
    Involving ours–he needs must fight
    To make true peace his own,
    He needs must combat might with might,
    Or Might would rule alone;
    And who loves war for war’s own sake
    Is fool, or crazed, or worse;
    But let the patriot-soldier take
    His meed of fame in verse;
    Nay–tho’ that realm were in the wrong
    For which her warriors bleed,
    It still were right to crown with song
    The warrior’s noble deed–
    A crown the Singer hopes may last,
    For so the deed endures;
    But Song will vanish in the Vast;
    And that large phrase of yours
    ‘A star among the stars,’ my dear,
    Is girlish talk at best;
    For dare we dally with the sphere
    As he did half in jest,
    Old Horace? ‘I will strike,’ said he,
    ‘The stars with head sublime,’
    But scarce could see, as now we see,
    The man in space and time,
    So drew perchance a happier lot
    Than ours, who rhyme to-day.
    The fires that arch this dusky dot–
    Yon myriad-worlded way–
    The vast sun-clusters’ gather’d blaze,
    World-isles in lonely skies,
    Whole heavens within themselves, amaze
    Our brief humanities.
    And so does Earth; for Homer’s fame,
    Tho’ carved in harder stone–
    The falling drop will make his name
    As mortal as my own.

    Irene.

    No!

    Poet.

    Let it live then–ay, till when?
    Earth passes, all is lost
    In what they prophesy, our wise men,
    Sun-flame or sunless frost,
    And deed and song alike are swept
    Away, and all in vain
    As far as man can see, except
    The man himself remain;
    And tho’, in this lean age forlorn,
    Too many a voice may cry
    That man can have no after-morn,
    Not yet of those am I.
    The man remains, and whatsoe’er
    He wrought of good or brave
    Will mould him thro’ the cycle-year
    That dawns behind the grave.

    And here the Singer for his art
    Not all in vain may plead
    ‘The song that nerves a nation’s heart
    Is in itself a deed.’

     

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    • July 5, 2020, at 10:05 PM PDT
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