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Oh great. Now I”m infected.
Interesting idea.
Thanks. It just popped into my head this morning.
Nice Lovecraftian vibe.
Thank you. A bit of horror to start your morning.
Excellent. Reminds me of the stars going out at the end of the Nine Billion Names of God (forgive my aging memory).
That was great.
I would stop the story after “I replied.” Let the reader figure it out.
Good edit.
Only if you say it out loud. It’s an audible virus.
I had considered it, but wasn’t sure it was enough. Thank you, and I have updated it.
Well, that was fast.
I’m just Mr. Responsiveness, I am.
A great story. Thank you.
A few years ago I read two novels by the British author Sarah Pinborough: Mayhem and its sequel Murder. The stories bounce off of the mythology that arose surrounding the Jack the Ripper murders in the late 1880s. These books were extremely gruesome. But they revolved around the concept of evil as a “beast” on a person’s back that was very popular in eastern Europe. There was a lot of self-flagellation involved to try to destroy it. It was an extremely interesting and vivid, and perhaps plausible, supernatural concept. The image of the beast on a person’s back has stayed with me. I can see why eastern Europeans believed in it.
You’re amazing, @arahant! That was a fabulous story. Except that now I’m going to have nightmares! Thanks.
Aren’t you glad you read it in the afternoon and not late at night?
Good point. Although it may be with me for a while. Ah, the sacrifices we make for good reading. And it’s worth it!
I thought for sure the name of the beast would be Socialism…
I really gotta back off the politics for a while.
I had the same thought. Very nicely done, Arahant.
Just popped into your head this morning?!? Sixties were good to you – wow. Interesting story. Where did you come up with the name of the beast – any meaning there?
Yep. I have spent years honing the creative engine of my imagination, and it works very well. Sometimes it works best when it is least convenient.
Not in the way you mean.
Thank you.
No meaning or significance, just a sound combo that popped into my head as I was writing. I thought about looking it up to ensure it was not somebody’s name, but in the end was too lazy to do so.
The creative process is fascinating to me. Several things changed from initial concept as I was writing it. For instance, I was going to have the doctor go on to another patient and introduce himself, which would be when he realized he was infected. It was better to do so in the presence of the patient/murder suspect, but Cod alone knows how I figured that out or how it came to me it would be better that way.
I’m just glad that I read it instead of listening to the audio version.
Omg there was more??? I’m not normally one for horror stories but this was riveting!!
It was just a single clause after a comma, that was better left to the reader’s imagination.
Only a very few words. As Judge said, better to let the reader figure it out.
Through the mist
Through the woods
Through the darkness and the shadows
It’s a nightmare but it’s one exciting ride
Say a prayer
Then we’re there
At the drawbridge of a castle
And there’s something truly terrible inside
It’s a beast
He’s got fangs
Razor sharp ones
Massive paws
Killer claws for the feast
Hear him roar
See him foam
But we’re not coming home
‘Til he’s dead
Good and dead
Kill the Beast!
Mob song, Beauty and the Beast