The Sudsbuster

 

He was one of the mellow, the soft-spoken, the tawny-haired — one who preferred to be alone. His name was Mark, a dishwasher at age 45. He was a drifter, a loner. He valued his freedom above all; dishwashing jobs he could always find.

Our paths crossed and re-crossed at the Café Claire, where I was tending bar. The Café Claire stood on the outskirts of an industrial town, near the railroad tracks, beside his temporary home. Sometimes he’d sit at the end of the bar, before his shift or after, and drink black coffee. Sometimes he’d speak to me, and sometimes he would not.

He was a tidy man, and orderly. He organized things in an oddly geometrical way. He did not drink, he did not smoke, he did not use drugs. He was clean-living and in good shape, neither depressed nor its opposite.

He was single, without children.

And he was free.

He read a lot — novels and non-fiction — to endure, perhaps, the knives of lust that so frequently strike. He had the quietude of one who has gone a long time without sex.

His home was an efficiency apartment — a “hutch,” he called it — with good plumbing. (This mattered to him.) He dealt only in cash and he was good with his money. He saved, he moved on. Sometimes he worked on farms, sometimes he loaded and unloaded freight, sometimes he carried hod. But when I first met him and asked him what he did, he said “I’m a sudsbuster.”

So in the way of things, he would come behind my bar at times, when I was busy, and, without asking me, he’d wash my dishes. I loved him for that. He was fast on his feet and knew how to work around people, so that nobody was in anybody’s way. Buried in bloody marys and martinis, I’d glance over and see him plunged to his elbows in suds, his gold-rim spectacles, which somehow endeared him to me, filled with the burning bar light, his neat goatee damp with perspiration and pied with skeins of gray. Working with somebody in this way creates a deep and ineradicable bond.

Two or three times, I saw him outside work while I was in my car. Each time, he was walking alone along the railroad tracks, at dusk like some solitary figure carved from the coming dark. This was a grizzled landscape, a prairie desert of Euclidian perfection, full of rings and radii, vast yet traversed by a single road: an isolate highway humming day or night with Mack truck tires. The wind ferried tumbleweeds across the lion’s pelt land. Deadwood everywhere stood silvery-gray, like the moon above, and invariably whenever I saw him, a feeling of melancholy came over me, a melancholy for him, I am not sure why.

This, though, is not about pity or pathos, and Mark was not a person to pitied.

This, rather, is about one man out of many millions making his way

in the land of the free, the USA.

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  1. Man With the Axe Inactive
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    Now that’s good writing.

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  2. Randy Weivoda Moderator
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    Ray Harvey: Our paths crossed and re-crossed at the Café Claire, where I was tending bar.

    Attaboy, Ray.  It always sounds annoying to my ear when I hear someone saw “I was bartending.”  I mean the whole piece is well written, but I wanted to especially offer my thanks for getting this one little thing right when practically no one does anymore.

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  3. The Scarecrow Thatcher
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    Ray Harvey:This, rather, is about one man out of many millions making his way

    in the land of the free, the USA.

    Why does it have to be more complicated than this? It’s the thing that makes us an exceptional country.  Not better, not superior – just exceptional. The exception to all other countries – an American can be one man out of millions making his own way, without the government or his fellow citizens or anyone or anything else telling him he can’t do as he pleases with his own stuff, and his own self.

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  4. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    Man With the Axe (View Comment):
    Now that’s good writing.

    Thank you, friend.

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  5. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    The Scarecrow (View Comment):

    Ray Harvey:This, rather, is about one man out of many millions making his way

    in the land of the free, the USA.

    Why does it have to be more complicated than this? It’s the thing that makes us an exceptional country. Not better, not superior – just exceptional. The exception to all other countries – an American can be one man out of millions making his own way, without the government or his fellow citizens or anyone or anything else telling him he can’t do as he pleases with his own stuff, and his own self.

    It doesn’t have to be. That was one of my primary purposes in writing this: the attempt to capture that idea, or theme.

    Thank you for reading.

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  6. Jules PA Inactive
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    Tending bar.

    Busting Suds?

    enjoyable post.

    I like your observation that Mark is not to be pitied for his choice of life.

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  7. tigerlily Member
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    Man With the Axe (View Comment):
    Now that’s good writing.

    Agree. Thanks Ray.

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  8. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    tigerlily (View Comment):

    Man With the Axe (View Comment):
    Now that’s good writing.

    Agree. Thanks Ray.

    Thank you, @tigerlily.

    And thank you for dropping by.

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  9. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    Jules PA (View Comment):
    Tending bar.

    Busting Suds?

    enjoyable post.

    I like your observation that Mark is not to be pitied for his choice of life.

    Busting suds!

    I like that very much, @julespa

    Thank you for dropping by.


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  10. Jules PA Inactive
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    When I was a kid, we would always ask for a sip of beer, or rather the foam on top: Dad, Give me some suds!

    I’ve been a sudsbuster my whole life. ?

     

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  11. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    Jules PA (View Comment):
    When I was a kid, we would always ask for a sip of beer, or rather the foam on top: Dad, Give me some suds!

    I’ve been a sudsbuster my whole life. ?

    Sucking on suds!

    As we used to call it in high school.

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  12. Susan Quinn Contributor
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    He lived the Zen saying, “Chop wood, carry water.” After all, that’s the foundation of what we do; everything else grows from there. Thanks, Ray.

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  13. Trink Coolidge
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    Where are you published?

    What else have you written?

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  14. Trink Coolidge
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    BTW:

    Wow.

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  15. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    Susan Quinn (View Comment):
    He lived the Zen saying, “Chop wood, carry water.” After all, that’s the foundation of what we do; everything else grows from there. Thanks, Ray.

    Thank you, @Susan Quinn.

    What’s that other Buddhist saying?

    Be happy in your work.

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  16. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    Trink (View Comment):
    Where are you published?

    What else have you written?

    You’re very kind, @trink.

    May I buy you a drink?

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  17. Trink Coolidge
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    Ray Harvey (View Comment):

    Trink (View Comment):
    Where are you published?

    What else have you written?

    You’re very kind, @trink.

    May I buy you a drink?

    Yep.  But only if you share what else you’ve written.

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  18. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    Trink (View Comment):
    BTW:

    Wow.

    P.S. https://www.amazon.com/Ray-Harvey/e/B007P65ZFW/ref=dp_byline_cont_pop_book_1

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  19. Trink Coolidge
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    Ray Harvey (View Comment):

    Trink (View Comment):
    BTW:

    Wow.

    P.S. https://www.amazon.com/Ray-Harvey/e/B007P65ZFW/ref=dp_byline_cont_pop_book_1

    I knew it!!!  Thank you :)

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  20. RightAngles Member
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    I also noticed and appreciated the “tending bar” thing. Beautiful writing.

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  21. Dave Sussman Member
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    Give me a rainy Sunday and 20 more chapters of this. Nicely  done Ray!

    “What people are ashamed of usually makes a good story.” – F. Scott Fitzgerald

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  22. Cato Rand Inactive
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    Beautiful.  Do you publish?  I wish I could write like that.

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  23. Scott Wilmot Member
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    A great American story. Thank you.

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  24. Trink Coolidge
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    Cato Rand (View Comment):
    Beautiful. Do you publish? I wish I could write like that.

    Yes he does!  Link above.  I’ve ordered a book for my hubby and the other on my Kindle.

    (Edit: https://www.amazon.com/Ray-Harvey/e/B007P65ZFW/ref=dp_byline_cont_pop_book_1 )

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  25. MLH Inactive
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    Trink (View Comment):

    Ray Harvey (View Comment):

    Trink (View Comment):
    BTW:

    Wow.

    P.S. https://www.amazon.com/Ray-Harvey/e/B007P65ZFW/ref=dp_byline_cont_pop_book_1

    I knew it!!! Thank you ?

    There’s another one, too, Trink:

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  26. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    MLH (View Comment):

    Trink (View Comment):

    Ray Harvey (View Comment):

    Trink (View Comment):
    BTW:

    Wow.

    P.S. https://www.amazon.com/Ray-Harvey/e/B007P65ZFW/ref=dp_byline_cont_pop_book_1

    I knew it!!! Thank you ?

    There’s another one, too, Trink:

    You’re very good to me, @mlh

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  27. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    Cato Rand (View Comment):
    Beautiful. Do you publish? I wish I could write like that.

    Dave Sussman (View Comment):
    Give me a rainy Sunday and 20 more chapters of this. Nicely done Ray!

    “What people are ashamed of usually makes a good story.” – F. Scott Fitzgerald

    I truly appreciate that, friend.

    Thank you for dropping by.

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  28. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    Scott Wilmot (View Comment):
    A great American story. Thank you.

    Thank you.

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  29. Ray Harvey Inactive
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    Cato Rand (View Comment):
    Beautiful. Do you publish? I wish I could write like that.

    You’re too kind.

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  30. RightAngles Member
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    Hmmm, our Ray Harvey is a fascinating character.

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