Freedom Through Old Folks

 

When a science experiment conducted by the home-schooled eight-year-old Toby goes astray, his grandfather Dane Crockford realizes it created fusion energy. Somehow, some of the hydrogen gas in the tank was converted to helium. In Light Up the Night, a science fiction novel by Holly Chism, this proves a game-changer.

Dane lives in a small rural American town. In this near-future world, except at the margins, the government monopolizes power generation and education. The exceptions are nuclear power and homeschooling.

All combustion engines were outlawed for environmental reasons. Only electric cars are permitted. Only “sustainable” sources of power (wind and solar) are used to generate electricity. The sole electric company—the oxymoronically-named Liberty Electric—is run by the government which charges monopoly prices for unreliable electricity.

Similarly, college tuition is so high that most attending need government student loans to obtain degrees. The economy is bad. The only way to pay off loans is through government loan-forgiveness programs offered by working for the Federal government. The loans never quite get paid off, making those in their twenties through forties indentured servants to the federal government.

The country slipped into tyranny so gradually that no one noticed until it was too late. Government snitches report those who resist. Resisters find their electricity cut off or (if they work for the government) reassigned to miserable jobs.

Dane is already labeled a troublemaker. He has grandfathered solar panels providing electricity during government-mandated blackouts. (He needs 24-hour power to keep his wife alive. She has respiratory problems requiring climate control.) Although retired, he is on-call as a welder for Liberty, the only one available in his area.

He maintained an uneasy truce with Liberty by providing vital skills in exchange for their tolerating his private power-generation setup. That collapses when a federal bureaucrat decides to disconnect Dane from the grid.

Dane, aided by his town’s other blue-collar grumpy old men and crafty old women, sees an opportunity for escape. By scaling up his grandson’s science experiment they can provide power for the town. The race is on to attain energy independence.

Light Up the Night is a delightful read. The McGuffin of practical fusion power is accomplished through the massive use of handwavium. It does not matter. The story is just so good. The wicked fail and the virtuous prosper as a second, peaceful, American Revolution unfolds. Chism provides a parable for modern times on how to restore traditional American values.

“Light Up the Night,” by Holly Chism, Independently Published, September 2024, 141 pages, 3.99 (ebook)

This review was written by Mark Lardas, who writes at Ricochet as Seawriter. Mark Lardas, an engineer, freelance writer, historian, and model-maker, lives in League City, TX. His website is marklardas.com.

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  1. Arahant Member
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    Seawriter: The McGuffin of practical fusion power is accomplished through the massive use of handwavium.

    It has always been thus. Still, sounds like a fun book.

    Seawriter: Dane, aided by his town’s other blue-collar grumpy old men and crafty old women,

    What could be more American?

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  2. Seawriter Contributor
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    Arahant (View Comment):

    Seawriter: The McGuffin of practical fusion power is accomplished through the massive use of handwavium.

    It has always been thus. Still, sounds like a fun book.

    I would not have reviewed it otherwise.

    Seawriter: Dane, aided by his town’s other blue-collar grumpy old men and crafty old women,

    What could be more American?

    Yup

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  3. kedavis Coolidge
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    I suppose it would be more realistic if the government were to seize or just destroy all the “bad” energy-production.  But then the book doesn’t have a happy ending.

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  4. Percival Thatcher
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    Arahant (View Comment):

    Seawriter: The McGuffin of practical fusion power is accomplished through the massive use of handwavium.

    It has always been thus. Still, sounds like a fun book.

    Science fiction, my one and only college English professor told me, gets one such per fictional work. A suitably well-constructed world can support a handful more.  But if you handwave too much, you are writing fantasy, not science fiction.

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  5. Matt Harris Member
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    Link to the book on Amazon. 

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  6. Seawriter Contributor
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    Matt Harris (View Comment):

    Link to the book on Amazon.

    Click on the cover to get a link.

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  7. Seawriter Contributor
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    Percival (View Comment):

    Arahant (View Comment):

    Seawriter: The McGuffin of practical fusion power is accomplished through the massive use of handwavium.

    It has always been thus. Still, sounds like a fun book.

    Science fiction, my one and only college English professor told me, gets one such per fictional work. A suitably well-constructed world can support a handful more. But if you handwave too much, you are writing fantasy, not science fiction.

    The initial discovery is the only time handwavium is employed.

    kedavis (View Comment):

    I suppose it would be more realistic if the government were to seize or just destroy all the “bad” energy-production. But then the book doesn’t have a happy ending.

    Atomic energy is allowed but not used (mainly because the government is incompetent technically, and proud of it). They cannot ban it since it is used on nuclear subs. (The town plans to use retired navy nuke types to run the powerplant.)  

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  8. kedavis Coolidge
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    Seawriter (View Comment):

    Percival (View Comment):

    Arahant (View Comment):

    Seawriter: The McGuffin of practical fusion power is accomplished through the massive use of handwavium.

    It has always been thus. Still, sounds like a fun book.

    Science fiction, my one and only college English professor told me, gets one such per fictional work. A suitably well-constructed world can support a handful more. But if you handwave too much, you are writing fantasy, not science fiction.

    The initial discovery is the only time handwavium is employed.

    I disagree.  Continuing to use the technology throughout the story, is necessarily continuous handwavium.  Especially for something like “cold fusion.”

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  9. Seawriter Contributor
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    kedavis (View Comment):
    I disagree.  Continuing to use the technology throughout the story, is necessarily continuous handwavium.  Especially for something like “cold fusion.”

    You are free to disagree. If so, you have no further interest in this book or this post. 

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